Letter writing

WALT. We are learning to write a thank you letter.

Letter writing

Date   ----->  November    17.11.20 

greeting -----> Dear Mum and Dad

body -----> Thank you for helping my school with the  Planting Day. Together in our group we planted about 5-6 kanuka trees. I really enjoyed planting trees with you. 

closing---->  Love

 signature---->Tristan Stevenson

foxes

 

 WALT:I am learning to  -  plan and create a presentation - on a specific topic

it was challenging was it challenging for you?

Recount with a Difference

 WALT Sequence ideas and avoid repetition

Getting up and ready for school

Feet to floor,

hands to blanket,

clothes to body (so I don't get yelled at)

cereal to bowl,

milk to breakfast,

spoon to mouth,

dishes to sink,  (for mum to wash)

tooth brush to teeth,

spit to sink,

snacks to lunch box,

eyes to TV, ( time to go  already? )

self to car,

vehicle to school.

draft speech

I want a new Computer 

Attention grabber: 

Have you ever waited for your computer to load? It’s So annoying!  

Opinion: 

I think I need new computer 

Reason one The battery overheats  if I play on it for too Long 

I can't go on my computer for too long because the battery overheats. 

When the battery overheats, it doesn't work For me. i Can't play games. I can't watch YouTube.  I can’t even do mathletics, readworks Or my Homework I literally can't do anything 

Reason two  slow to load the screen 

The screen is so slow to load I can't even play my games. It Doesn't  even have sound when I’m trying to watch a video.  Games and video are so much better with sound. A new  Computer can load it’s screen much faster than my old computer.  It has sound for games and video. 

Reason three I could talk to my friend from another school 

My Friend is at another school and I can't see him at my school. I had a new computer I could try to connect to his computer. I could find him on games videos Google meetsOr emails. My Old computer cannot Keep up With the technology updates  

Reason four It keeps me Entertained And not Fighting with my brother and sister 

If I had a new computer I won't fight too much with my brother and sister. I would be so happy because I'll be playing on my games because it's so fun When I am happy I don't feel like arguing with them  

Conclusion thank you 

Tree Felling

WALT: we are learning about the people in our community and the jobs they do.

I saw two trees fall  down  to the ground.

ANZAC Poppies

WALT we are learning about ANZAC poppies.
saying the place name of the 2nd battle was hard and i had to google it.
do you wake your mum and dad on ANZAC day? 

Painting my room

i choose the colours red and blue because thay are my favourite colours to look at. I can't sleep in my room but I can sleep in my mums room next to her bed on a mattress