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I want a new Computer 

Attention grabber: 

Have you ever waited for your computer to load? It’s So annoying!  

Opinion: 

I think I need new computer 

Reason one The battery overheats  if I play on it for too Long 

I can't go on my computer for too long because the battery overheats. 

When the battery overheats, it doesn't work For me. i Can't play games. I can't watch YouTube.  I can’t even do mathletics, readworks Or my Homework I literally can't do anything 

Reason two  slow to load the screen 

The screen is so slow to load I can't even play my games. It Doesn't  even have sound when I’m trying to watch a video.  Games and video are so much better with sound. A new  Computer can load it’s screen much faster than my old computer.  It has sound for games and video. 

Reason three I could talk to my friend from another school 

My Friend is at another school and I can't see him at my school. I had a new computer I could try to connect to his computer. I could find him on games videos Google meetsOr emails. My Old computer cannot Keep up With the technology updates  

Reason four It keeps me Entertained And not Fighting with my brother and sister 

If I had a new computer I won't fight too much with my brother and sister. I would be so happy because I'll be playing on my games because it's so fun When I am happy I don't feel like arguing with them  

Conclusion thank you 

Matariki

WALT we are about Matariki

When is matariki? Thes year it was on the 25th of june. What is matariki? It is the Maori new year and a cluster of stars Where is matariki? It is east of the southern cross east ot pot east and is best seen in the early morning

5 Facts about Matariki

1)What it is called around the world. Maori - Tiny eyes or eyes of god lish, it is called the Pleiades (its ancient Greek name) or the Seven Sisters. The Hawaiian name is Makali‘i, or ‘eyes of royalty’, and in Japan it is Subaru, meaning ‘gathered together’. 2) matariki tells maoriwhen to plant tleir vegtables 3)there are more than 500 stars in the matariki cluster but 6 or 7 can be seen without a telescope 4) it is 440 light years away from earth 5) it would take 4.8 billion years to get there at speed of a car going 100kmph

it was hard for me to find the facts because there was lot to read i liked the art because

i got to use the hot glue gun

do you celebrate Matariki?

Learning Maps

Walt we are learning about who and what helps us  learn


My learning map shows that my  surface pro helps me

I don’t like making learning maps

What helps you learn???