I want a new Computer
Attention grabber:
Have you ever waited for your computer to load? It’s So annoying!
Opinion:
I think I need new computer
Reason one The battery overheats if I play on it for too Long
I can't go on my computer for too long because the battery overheats.
When the battery overheats, it doesn't work For me. i Can't play games. I can't watch YouTube. I can’t even do mathletics, readworks Or my Homework I literally can't do anything
Reason two slow to load the screen
The screen is so slow to load I can't even play my games. It Doesn't even have sound when I’m trying to watch a video. Games and video are so much better with sound. A new Computer can load it’s screen much faster than my old computer. It has sound for games and video.
Reason three I could talk to my friend from another school
My Friend is at another school and I can't see him at my school. I had a new computer I could try to connect to his computer. I could find him on games videos Google meetsOr emails. My Old computer cannot Keep up With the technology updates
Reason four It keeps me Entertained And not Fighting with my brother and sister
If I had a new computer I won't fight too much with my brother and sister. I would be so happy because I'll be playing on my games because it's so fun When I am happy I don't feel like arguing with them
Conclusion thank you
